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October 16th, 2007

Sketchbook - Adam’s Dad

No joke, just doing a little character redesigning maybe. I’ve never been happy with the character of Adam’s dad… Adam’s dad was the character that I designed without actually designing him, and what I mean is that I wrote a joke that needed the dad, and I decided to just draw him without any of my usual planning, but now that I have some new jokes coming up that involve a greater dad presence, I feel I need to rectify the situation.

Basically, what you’re all looking at are the usual sketches I do while trying to figure out what it is that I’m doing with the character. I fool around with facial structure, proportion, and possible robotic parts. I haven’t yet decided what changes to implement. Basically, now is your time as readers to weigh in if you want… Or not. It’s cool either way.

16 Responses to “Sketchbook - Adam’s Dad”

  1. wit Says:

    how menacing of a character do you plan “dad” to be? Is he evil like Grandpa or more of a everyday dad?

  2. Kevin Says:

    I like the idea of adding more robotic parts. Not to insult your strip, but I really enjoyed seeing the sketches in place of a strip (I would have preferred it in addition to a strip). I like seeing what other artists go through in the development process.

  3. jim (JP&TM creator) Says:

    @wit:I figure Adam’s dad is not as menacing as grandpa, but far more crackpot than the average dad.

    @Kevin: Yeah, I’d started to forget the fact that the whole point of my starting this website was not to keep producing a daily comic strip, but rather to develop on hone my comic creating abilities, and figure out what I’m doing with my strip… but I’d been getting away from that for a while, and I want to get back to it.

  4. Alex Says:

    I don’t know why but I’m feeling a robotic helper more than robotic appendage…not sure why, but that’s my weird gut-feelingy 2 cents.

    As always, love the strip and especially monkey-induced antics.

  5. Julio Says:

    I really like a combination of some of the figures… The jetpack looks really cool and i like the pointy hairdo of the fourth guy on the right. Body type is not really an issue for me but thats what i would like to see on Adams dad.

    Those are my 2 cents worth. lol, just saw Alex’s quote of his 2 cents so now you have 4 more…

    lame joke. My bad

  6. jim (JP&TM creator) Says:

    Thanks for the four cents guys! (Although I do prefer higher denominations usually.)

    Lets see… Pointy hairdos, a robotic helper, and a jetpack… Got it. I’ll take that into consideration.

  7. Theresa Says:

    I think he should have some robot parts, just so that he looks more like Adam. I kind of like the little face on the far right (under the guy wearing boots). My two cents, for whatever it’s worth (yes, I know it’s worth two cents).

  8. jim (JP&TM creator) Says:

    Yeah, I agree Theresa… I’ve been leaning towards some sort of robot part… Not sure what yet though, but it would help tie him in with adam.

  9. Doug Says:

    Hi, Jim. Thanks for including us in your creative process. I kinda like the dude fifth from the left with the high forehead and goatee. Looks rather cool and intelligent in a “dad” kind of way. Robotics are always a good idea for that future look, but are they hereditary? Why IS Adam a cyborg anyway? Accident? Evil experiment that went horribly wrong? Lifestyle choice? I guess the answers may be found in future strips. LOL, “future”, geddit? Go on, just slap me.

  10. me! (pd guy) Says:

    Careful with that “slap me” offer, Doug. Jim tried to email me a punch in the face yesterday. Damn sensitive cartoonists. A real “pain in the rear wheel” if you know what I mean.

  11. MJ Says:

    Like the sketchwork. Trying to play the catch up game.

  12. jim (JP&TM creator) Says:

    @Doug: Nah, robotics aren’t hereditary, but but they’d help to visually tie everything together I think. As for Adam’s story, I haven’t gone into it yet.

    @Me!: I just said I wanted to find a way to email my fist to your face, but I suppose I’ll have to just go with the old fashion snail mail bomb… uh, I mean, I hope you enjoy the cookies I sent.

    @MJ: Oh man… you’re lucky I haven’t been doing a great job of keeping up my production.

  13. Jon Says:

    I dunno, I really like the one on the far left. He’s got the robotic parts like Adam, and he looks sort of approachable and avuncular, like a dad ought to, though with a hint of mad scientist about him. I think most of the others look a bit too mean/evil.

    But, y’know, like everyone else, I just got two pennies in my pocket, rubbing up against each other. ‘Taint much.

  14. Eric Says:

    Kind of late, but my $.02 is that I think that you are on the right track with the hair. Nothing says “crackpot” like out-of-control hair.

  15. Jarrett Says:

    I like the farthest , farthest , farthest one on the right. That one with a robot hand would be great.

  16. jim (JP&TM creator) Says:

    Thanks for the pocket change! I like the out of control hair and robot parts. As for the face… That’s gonna be tricky. I need a face that’s not too menacing looking, but will be on occasion.

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