Well, it continues. As always, if you’re new here, the kite storyline begins right here.
In this strip, Adam’s adventure continues, with a (I hope) clearly illustrated path of destruction.
On the technical side, I’m afraid my perspective might be a bit wonky in the first panel… although it’s tough to say, since it’s supposed to be sort of a fish-eye style anyways. Frickin’ perspective still causes me trouble.
Good morning Jim !
The firt panel?? I don’t think you need to worry about the perspective, it’s fine. What is ‘charming’ and is characterful about your stuff – for me – are the 6 little panels on the right. there’s as much intent and tension (albeit internal) in those panels, in the way that our heroes had/have (C&H, Peanuts etc)
I realy like your artwork and it is your ‘voice’ so don’t fuss too much, let it sing!
All the best,
Jan
OK, just for the record it’s not 2:03 where I am (England) it’s 10:03 and you lot are still snoozing away! While I’ve been iup for hours! (I’m not good in the mornongs!, can you tell???!!)
Jan
Thanks for the feedback Jan! I’ve been working on getting more character into the strip lately (in the last two strips as well as before my sabbatical) through body language and expression… Good to see it’s working out.
Still read JP&TM Jim, glad to see a return to the drawing board. Latest strips are very cool. Also enjoyed seeing the recent sketches.
Thanks MJ. I’m always torn on the sketches… On one side, they’re easy to do, and they add a nice bit of extra content to the site, but at the same time, I wonder if it’s worth it to break up the readability or continuity of the comics with sketchbook pages.
I can’t get enough of JP&TM, so I would love to see more sketches on days you’re not posting new strips… but I’m kind of greedy that way.
I love how you evoke such movement and flow, Jim.
@Kevin: Yeah you are. We’ll see how things go.
@Wit: Thanks Mike, that’s something I’ve been steadily working at.
Another JP & TM
What a treat!
I love how the impending doom is cascading down the slope in panel #1.
@Brandy: Thanks Brandy. I’m trying to get a new JP&TM done each week.